tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6524151126733954593.post4399758793793460922..comments2023-04-27T10:13:31.825-05:00Comments on Moore Family Fun: Waiting for the iceMommy Khttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05642217650953374268noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6524151126733954593.post-75690888292182013352012-03-30T22:30:59.859-05:002012-03-30T22:30:59.859-05:00I can actually see this as a little book. With the...I can actually see this as a little book. With the visible editing.PAMELA HODGEShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00834410745679219203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6524151126733954593.post-9964132272115673502012-03-26T09:56:10.707-05:002012-03-26T09:56:10.707-05:00What a spectrum to envision - no coat, frozen wate...What a spectrum to envision - no coat, frozen water; flip flops, no waves - I loved how you wrote what you wanted/would expect to see, and left it, lined out, with replaced words that seemed to be out of place, but weren't.jenb.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02474903426683085763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6524151126733954593.post-54817912212034733912012-03-26T08:34:11.700-05:002012-03-26T08:34:11.700-05:00Love the contrast between her outfit and the words...Love the contrast between her outfit and the words - I can just hear it - but it is sunny outside so I don't need a coat or shoes.Juliann in WAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895551530087690102noreply@blogger.com